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Emo Love,
i see a girl,
with black lip stick and some tight jeans,
black shirt,and her hair slightly pulled up.
Shes standing in the in the hall of the house,
waiting,for her lover.

A boy comes into the house,
looking into her eyes,grabs her arms
and says to her face 'i love you'.
She smiles brightly saying 'i love you to'.
they kiss,
they hold each other,makeing each other safe,
he smiles,she smiles laying her head on him.
he rocks back and forth rubing her back,
she sighs lovingly
she says 'i'll never leave you,if you never leave me'
and he says 'i wont ever leave you...ever'
she smiles again,he smiles back.

Emo love,
so,happy,so,not emo?
heh,when there with eachother.
Nothing else is important till,that day....
he goes up to her,she looks up at him.
He says "can we be friends?'
she suddenly stops,tearing up, saying,
"oh my god! oh my god! oh my god!'
crying,screaming,....scared.
He looks at her with a frown.
and says 'i..i just don't know anymore,we're just teens'
she cries/screams looking at him trying to hold him
and says 'no! please no! i love you! so much!'.
she falls down on the ground not able to breath from crying
he sits by her and says 'im.So sorry.I,just,don't know anymore.'
she looks at him and gets up 'I..I,understand'
he sighs
she sniffs wipeing the tears away walking out the door.
From there Favorite place.After 8 months.
Emo love.
It is so awsome when you find love,
then terible when you lose it just like that.
she sobs still loveing him after a month
he flirts with every girl,she whatches him flirt
not telling him her feeling for him still
he's so happy
shes glad to see him happy,again.
she smiles being with her friends at some times
till,
he comes in the room,her heart beats fast,
it races
it kinda,stops
she still loves him as much as she did before,
and that Emo love,will NEVER change

i see a girl,
with black lip stick and some tight jeans,
black shirt,and her hair slightly pulled up.
Shes standing in the in the hall of the hall,
waiting,for her lover.

A boy comes into the house,
looking into her eyes,grabs her arms
and says to her face 'i love you'.
She smiles brightly saying 'i love you to'.
they kiss,
they hold each other,makeing each other safe,
he smiles,she smiles laying her head on him.
he rocks back and forth rubing her back,
she sighs lovingly
she says 'i'll never leave you,if you never leave me'
and he says 'i wont ever leave you...ever'
she smiles again,he smiles back.

Emo love,
so,happy,so,not emo?
heh,when there with eachother.
Nothing else is important till,that day....
he goes up to her,she looks up at him.
He says "can we be friends?'
she suddenly stops,tearing up, saying,
"oh my god! oh my god! oh my god!'
crying,screaming,....scared.
He looks at her with a frown.
and says 'i..i just don't know anymore,we're just teens'
she cries/screams looking at him trying to hold him
and says 'no! please no! i love you! so much!'.
she falls down on the ground not able to breath from crying
he sits by her and says 'im.So sorry.I,just,don't know anymore.'
she looks at him and gets up 'I..I,understand'
he sighs
she sniffs wipeing the tears away walking out the door.
From there Favorite place.After 8 months.
Emo love.
It is so awsome when you find love,
then terible when you lose it just like that.
she sobs still loveing him after a month
he flirts with every girl,she whatches him flirt
not telling him her feeling for him still
he's so happy
shes glad to see him happy,again.
she smiles being with her friends at some times
till,
he comes in the room,her heart beats fast,
it races
it kinda,stops
she still loves him as much as she did before,
and that Emo love,will NEVER change
©2008-2010 =FrightDelight
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Author's Comments

something i wrote for someone(cool-wolf-mom) , and it's based on my life,im just not using me or the guy it happend with,only emos cause it seems better that way in the poem =]

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:iconfading-justice:
wow.. powerful sis

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:iconwhitefangkiba:
wow, very emotional :hug: <._.>

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who is howling with the wolves but isn't one of them, shouldn't be surprised if he gets bit...
:iconglasswings1:
........................I didn't know you're that deep. XDD

It's kinda sad... yet heart warming. She still loves him, but is willing to let him go and be happy. :happytear: I'm so proud of you!

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:icongothiclover38:
wow...it kinda reminds me of you and John..sorry if it upsets you if i said that ;n; but it sometimes reminds me of myself...T~T

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:aww: Cuteness. I has it. :flirty:
:iconfrightdelight:
thanks =]

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:iconfrightdelight:
thankies! :hug:

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:iconfrightdelight:
LOL it kinda happend to me..i just based it off my life onto someones in my mind =]

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:iconfrightdelight:
it is based off me and john xDDD! i just based it off me and john and put it onto someone elses life in my mind =]..like...2 emo kids xD

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~:heart:~ R.I.P james,Branna,Mike,and Taylor. i luv you all! ~:heart:~
:iconwhitefangkiba:
np :hug:

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